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Wednesday, August 10, 2011

INNOVATING ON A POEM

Today we read the poem doodledum dancing it had lots of action words ending in ing.Next I wrote some text like the first verse in doodledum dancing this is the first verse:
I'm rocking i'm reeling
I'm wirlligig wheeling
tip-tapping my toesies
and singing this song.

Now this is what I wrote:
I'm prancing i'm pumping
I'm bolting i'm bumping
I'm bo-bouncing my bonies
and humming my song.

Have you innovated   on a poem?                                                                                           

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